3 thoughts on “WRITERS NOTEBOOK

  1. Hi Amelia,
    I love your story because it has lots of describing words. I also like how you put that
    diary thing on the last page. I love the conclusion about how you said “and that’s the
    diary of my great great grandparents and how they met.”. Keep up the great work I’d love to see more great stories from you.
    From Charlize

  2. Dear Ameila
    I liked the way your text was nice and clear and was able to read. Also how you set up your display like that letter looking thin on the left on you page. But I was confused what was happening it started about a cur h then about BIKES!?

    From Nathan

  3. Hi Amelia,
    I love your story but it took a while for me to read it because there were 5 different images, it got very annoying. Maybe put it into a video?
    Thanks, Taya

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