Excellent Explenations

The other day, I worked on my strength, as you could probably guess, writing! It’s not my best piece of writing but I’m proud of what I have produced! I put in a lot of effort and I don’t think I could have written it any better. My goal was to put together other people’s research and create my own text about why you can’t control your heart. I chose this pacific subject simply because my mums a nurse and I knew she would be able to help me understand other texts and construct my own. I thought about the diagrams I chose and the audience I was writing this for, I tried my best not to put in complicated illustrations.

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2 thoughts on “Excellent Explenations

  1. Hey Amelia,

    Nice work I really like the way you how you put a diagram on your post. Next time maybe use paragraphs.

    From Lulu

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